As started in part 1 of this series, I have set out to test an LLMs ability to technical edit. For my first set of tests, I am using a pair of articles I created, filled with very bad advice. The advice is the same for both articles, but what differs is the intro and the conclusion. One says the advice is good, the other said it is bad. It is all very very bad, including a really terrible SELECT statement versus loop construct that will cause an eternal loop that inserts into a temporary table.
My goal is